“Skinny vanilla latte for Melissa!” the barista shouts above
the constant hum of the café. It is their afternoon rush; students are coming
in after a long day of classes for their dose of caffeine to keep them going
through the day. Through the tall windows it is clear that the snow is not
letting up, as they sky gets threateningly darker by the hour.
The small room
is dimly lit, but the light from the various open laptops brightens up small
corners, making it easy to see the strained face of a small, dark haired boy frantically
typing, and the half closed eyes of a girl sipping on her frappachino held in
one hand, and resting her head on the other. The leather on the arm of a dark
purple couch is cracked, from the weight of the many people who have sat there
before. A girl from the same couch gets up, and makes her way to the restroom
while a cold gust of air gushes through the room pulling everyone’s attention
toward the door. A mother and child make their way toward the register, the
mother ordering a hot chocolate and a blueberry muffin. As she reaches for her
wallet, the change spills out onto the floor, now wet from her snow boots. The
young boy picks up his mother’s belongings, wipes them with the sleeve of his
coat, and waits patiently for his snack. The pair sits down at a small table
near the window; the woman takes off the lid of the cup and cautiously blows on
the hot chocolate before handing it to her son to take a sip. The boy puts the
now dry change out onto the table, and counts it out before pushing it to his
mother’s side of the table. After there is nothing left but crumbs and an empty
cup, the mother bends down to zip up her son’s jacket, and they hold hands as
they leave the coziness of the café, and go back out into the cold.
Nice observations and I love the mother-son framing of the ending. I have a sense of the feel, look and smell of this coffee shop. People in photos or more quotes like the one from the barista would enliven this. it adds more points of view just like dialog in tweeting and leavens writing. B+
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